Oh dear, in the previous blog, after editing 4 times and promising to not edit it again I noticed another mistake! I spy with my little eyes a sentence that jumped from present to past tense. Who will spot it first?
If t.t reads my blog she will for sure scrutinize my writing and find this error.
As promised:
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If t.t reads my blog she will for sure scrutinize my writing and find this error.
As promised:
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scru·ti·nize
verb,-nized, -niz·ing.–verb (used with object)
1.
to examine in detail with careful or critical attention.
–verb (used without object)
2.
to conduct a scrutiny.
LOOOL.
ReplyDeletesince you made that comment, I decided to rise up to the challenge and fix some minor errors...
Since writing in my beautiful journals have turned to something I only do when something 'important' happens and writing in pen is so nice, but so time consuming I decided to BLOG!"
- supposed to be "has"
"It cease to amaze me when the average Joes and Janes post the most thought-provoking writing"
- ceases
"I think a lot, and I even think about posting what I think a lot, but the thought of needing to organize those thoughts into structured sentences that other people could possibly comprehend intimidated me."
- intimidates (kinda confusing sentence btw)
"I guess I was also afraid of what others would criticize my writing in not-so-polite ways."
- awk. (I guess I was also afraid of others criticizing my writing in not-so polite ways sounds better)
YOU ASKED FOR IT!
PS. You left out some commas too.
ReplyDeletePPS. I promise this will be the last time i do this. hahahahhaa
you didn't even find the mistake i was fretting over!
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